Sunday, May 3, 2015

50 words or less


My phone keeps auto correcting the word love to live 
because I think it knows that when you're 
sweating,
breathing, 
feeling,

that when you're alive 

love can't be much further than a block away




and I think that's more profound than I could ever try to be


BP







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12 comments:

  1. whitneyMay 3, 2015 at 7:52 PM

    i enjoyed this
    and the pictures added to the aesthetic
    (idk how to use that word but it felt right)

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  2. Gwendalyn RowsMay 3, 2015 at 7:55 PM

    I agreed. With it all.

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  3. Tyler Cook May 3, 2015 at 8:47 PM

    Really liked that last line!

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  4. Auburn CraneMay 3, 2015 at 9:09 PM

    yes. this is good. i believe in this

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  5. Philo FarnsworthMay 3, 2015 at 9:34 PM

    you said enough that it was profound but not over done. that takes skill.

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  6. Beatrice McCandlessMay 3, 2015 at 10:04 PM

    always so good

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  7. Sunnyside UpMay 3, 2015 at 10:44 PM

    Impressive: you wrote stuff that hit me in the heart with few words. That's skill

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  8. NobodyMay 4, 2015 at 3:51 PM

    This one is really good

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  9. NobodyMay 4, 2015 at 3:51 PM

    This one is really good

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  10. Alta JuneMay 4, 2015 at 11:01 PM

    Mmmmmm uh huhhhh yesssss

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  11. NelsonMay 6, 2015 at 4:58 PM

    Great title. And there's something poetic about the iPhone autocorrect. Something's there. And you're all over it. This was fantastic.

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  12. Lola J.May 17, 2015 at 10:15 PM

    i wish i could have performed this in class.

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